英语作文求检查修改This cartoon graphically portrays a scene that vari

英语作文求检查修改
This cartoon graphically portrays a scene that various people are fascinated with their online life.What makes the picture intriguing is the fact that these people are isolated from each other with small rooms,facing to the screens individually.(这里我想表达的是面对着自己的屏幕,这里屏幕用单数还是复数?）It seems that they would like to talk online(online到底是形容词吧?我这样用对的吗?）,rather than face to face.
Simple as the picture is,its subtle connotation endeavors to inform us that due attention has to be paid to the issue of communication over the Internet.On the one hand,online communication is set to become an essential feature of individuals' life.It comes no surprise that a vast majority of people are indulged in communication over the Internet,considering the great pleasure and convenience it brings about.Online talking,as a means of communication,shortens the distance between people,which,many believe,is one of its apparent advantages.On the other hand,some viewing online talking as a curse of morden life,for it has bred a society which is ruthless and relentless.
Truly,apart from those benifits,internet communication might have its drawbacks.But in is my view that. sheungfung 1年前他留下的回答 已收到2个回答

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