英语作文This summer vacation,I went to beach with my sister pare

英语作文
This summer vacation,I went to beach with my sister parent and me.we went to there by car.we live in a tent.on the first day,we swimming and playing with water.we was very happy.at the nightfall we play the ssand.we had a interesting day.on the night,we sleep in the tent.on the second day,we got up early.we saw the sun rise.it is very beautiful.on the afternoon,we went back home.i have a good trip.
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This summer vacation,I went to the beach with my sister and parents.we went there by a car.we lived in a tent.on the first day,we swam and played water.we were very happy.at the nightfall we played sand.we had an interesting day.at the night,we slept in the tent.on the second day,we got up early.we saw the sun rising.it was very beautiful.in the afternoon,we went back home.i had a good trip.
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该名网友总共回答了3个问题，此问答他的回答如下：

你是不直接拿在线翻译翻译的啊。。。。。
真是无语了。。。。。不过要是第一次也不错了。。。。加油吧~
In this summer vacation,I went to beach with my sister and my parents（是和妹妹和你父母吗~是这个意思吧） .We went there by car.we live in a tent（这句。。。去掉吧~）. T...

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邪君123 网友

该名网友总共回答了10个问题，此问答他的回答如下：

今年暑假,我去了沙滩和我姐姐和我去了那里的父母住在tent.on由car.we的第一天,我们游泳和玩water.we非常happy.at天黑了,我们打ssand.we有一个有趣的day.on夜间我们睡觉的时候,在tent.on第二天,我们early.we看见太阳rise.it很beautiful.on下午,我们回到家里,祝你旅途愉快。...

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