导读:下面的对话有什么语病么?A:Hey,Anna.You look so sad.What‘s wong with you? 下面的对话有什么语病么?A:Hey,Anna.You look so sad.What‘s wong with you?B:My mother always wants me to achieve high grades.Though l try my be...
下面的对话有什么语病么?A:Hey,Anna.You look so sad.What's wong with you?
下面的对话有什么语病么?
A:Hey,Anna.You look so sad.What's wong with you?
B:My mother always wants me to achieve high grades.Though l try my best.She always isn't happy with my grades.L don't know why she is so strict to me.
A:l think you should talk with your mother.My mother is strict to me,too.l want to cut short hair,but my mother don't allow me to do.She think l should study hard instead of caring about my hair style.l can't understand why she is so stubborn.
B:You should talk with your mother,too.l think hair style isn't very important for us.
A:Maybe you are right.
B:So,let's go home and talk with our mother now!
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该名网友总共回答了13个问题,此问答他的回答如下:采纳率:100%
1.Though l try my best,she always isn't happy with my grades.
改成 though I try my best,she still doesn't happy with my grades.
还有,中间是逗号,而不是一整句话.
2.l think you should talk with your mother.
改成talk to 比较好些.
3.l want to cut short hair,but my mother don't allow me to do.
改成I want to have my hair cut.But my mother doesn't allow me to do so.(my mother是第三人称,加does,to do 后面加个so比较好些.)
就整段对话的语境来看,最后B说,你也应该跟你妈妈好好谈谈,我觉得头发对我们来说不是很重要.这句话有点奇怪啊,既然不重要,那为什么还要剪呢?应该换成:我认为头发长短不会影响到学习成绩.
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爱情里的谁和谁
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该名网友总共回答了81个问题,此问答他的回答如下:
1 Though l try my best.She always isn't happy with my grades.
--Though I have tried my best,she is still unsatisfied with my grades.
2 strict to
--strict with
3 l want to cut short h...
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