短文改错a farmer's wife once lost diamond ring in the yard.she s

短文改错
a farmer's wife once lost diamond ring in the yard.
she searched for it everywhere,or as darkness fell
she realized sad that it was lost forever.
a few days later a hen was scratching among stones
that she saw something shining in the sunlight.
She picked it eager,thinking it might be some
new kind of grain,but it was too hard to eat.
"Well,"she said to herself,burying it deep under
the earth again,"you may be a fine stone for some
people,i suppose.But you are no useful to me. 寒枫阳影 1年前他留下的回答 已收到2个回答

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A farmer's wife once lost a/her diamond ring in the yard.She searched for it everywhere,and as darkness fell she realized saddly that it was lost forever.A few days later when a hen was scratching among stones,she saw something shining in the sunlight.She picked it eagerly,thinking it might be some new kind of grains,but it was too hard to eat."Well",she said to herself,burying it deep in earth again,"you may be a fine stone for somepeople,I suppose.But you are no use to me." n_@

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wwh168168 网友

该名网友总共回答了23个问题，此问答他的回答如下：

上面那篇基本正确，再改几个地方：She looked for（表具象，search for+一般为抽象的东西） it everywhere,She picked it up （pick up 是捡起来的意思，pick单独偏向于挑选采摘更多一些）eagerly,……"Well",she said to herself,and buried it deep into （ deep in 表深陷、 沉湎...

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