我的英语作文有符合规范吗?(one)Today is the first of the Summer Holiday.I

我的英语作文有符合规范吗?
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Today is the first of the Summer Holiday.It also mean the term was over.I'm so happy.I never study on the Summer Holiday and I can go hiking ,have a picnic and so on.It's excited.
I will make a travel plan for Summer Holiday.I'm going to the Shaoguan with my family.We're getting there by car.We will climb the mountain and take some photos.We will make some new friends and eat good food.The most important thing is to help holding identity CARDS.It's exciting.We will play for a few days and go back home.
I hope Summer Holiday can bring me a lot of fun .
Date:2013/7/23 cat_3124 1年前他留下的回答 已收到3个回答

檀月清影 网友

该名网友总共回答了10个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：100%

句子错误很多,也不太连贯,我帮你重新整理一下吧
Today is the first day of my summer vacation, so it means that this term have been completed. So truthfully, I feel really awesome, due to I never study during holidays. And in these days, I can do some sports and play, such as hiking, picnic and some others. And I think It 's maybe very exicting.
In addition, I shall take a car to get to Shaoguan for touring with my household members, and my dad will be our driver. And if we got there, we shall climb mountains and take photographs
mutually, and we shall get acquainted with some new friends whom are living in there. And then, the most essential thing is in order to help me with gaining the identity card.
Anyway, I wish that the summer vacation will bring luck and happiness to me.
2013. 07. 23,
XXX
这样会不会好很多,还有就是注意一下写作文不要用太多口语,能提高初高中阶段的作文分数

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螺丝钉法 网友

该名网友总共回答了2个问题，此问答他的回答如下：

不符合 Today is the first Day of the Summer Holiday
mean加s
on 改为during during the summer
excited 改为 exciting
holding 改为 hold
play 改为 have fun and后面加个 then
希望能帮到你 还望采纳啊

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1ball 网友

该名网友总共回答了4个问题，此问答他的回答如下：

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