这句英语有没有错误呢?The journalist advocating participatory democracy

这句英语有没有错误呢?
the journalist advocating participatory democracy in all phases of life,whose own children are enrolled in private schools.翻译是“倡导终身参与***制的新闻记者却把***送进私立学校.” 简化起来：the journalist whose own children are enrolled in private schools.这句话对吗? 屈乙一 1年前他留下的回答 已收到1个回答

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该名网友总共回答了11个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：100%

正确的改法：
The journalist's own children are enrolled in private schools
The journalist (whose own children) are enrolled in private schools 这句话是不准确的 如果去掉定语从句 会引起起义

1年前他留下的回答

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