导读:有人能帮我把以下我写的句子分类 哪些是属於 thesis statement...的吗? 有人能帮我把以下我写的句子分类 哪些是属於 thesis statement...的吗?可不可以帮帮我把我写的句子 修改语法 然後帮我分类归类整理 哪些可以说是thesis statemnt..等等的 请帮我写的句子分类整理吧 introThesis statement : Jealous...
有人能帮我把以下我写的句子分类 哪些是属於 thesis statement...的吗?
有人能帮我把以下我写的句子分类 哪些是属於 thesis statement...的吗?
可不可以帮帮我把我写的句子 修改语法 然後帮我分类归类整理 哪些可以说是thesis statemnt..等等的 请帮我写的句子分类整理吧
intro
Thesis statement :
Jealousy drives people crazy.....the lawer's action caused his wife want to escape from him,
organizing statement
这我不知道......
body paragraph #1
topic sentence : jealousy will ruin a relationship
the reason why he was keep wonder and distrust his wife, because of his jealousy made he feel hamble.
for example: the lawer, watched his young wife dancing with a men of her own age,he was very
sad, for she seemed to glow with a laughter and elation that didn't touch her life
with him at all. He was jealous, he knew;( in paragraph 1)
he realized that his wife is young and beautiful,he feel very hamble, so he decide to spy on his wife
make sure his wife won't escape from his side.
#2
topic sentence : 这个就想不出来该怎麼写了
the lawyer is like an untimed bomb which may explode anytime because of his distrust and self-abasement. The detonation point, as depicted in the story, is the extreme fear of his wife arising from his distrust as he thought she is having an affair with a young man when he saw her talking happily with the young man, and his subsequent spying on her, which ended up with her accidental shooting at him by mistake.
以下是我写的 conclusion 部分也请帮我修改语法 谢谢了
conclusion
the lawer's crazy actions scare his wife, if he could have a bit more trust
in his wife, she would be much happier and would love him more like before
and the tragedy would have not happened in the end.
i believe beuilding a trust relationship is
very important for each others, especially for a couple,
a good relationship is to respect each other, don't set limits, trush each other
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