一道英语改错题When I was in Grade4,my father hired of Ziba to help

一道英语改错题
When I was in Grade4,my father hired of Ziba to help around the house.He had a sister .Since Ziba was uneducated,she would ask me write her sister letters sometimes. One day,I asked her what she’d like to learn to read and write. She gave me the very big smile but said she’d like that very much. So we’sit at the kitchen table after I finished my own schoolwork and I’d taught her letters and words.She starts calling me Teacher Soraya. The last time Ziba wrote her own letter,I knew I wanted to be a tescher.
有10个错误 飞天小馒头 1年前他留下的回答 已收到3个回答

爱我一辈子1 网友

该名网友总共回答了15个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：86.7%

When I was in Grade 4,my father hired () Ziba to help around the house.(She) had a sister.Since Ziba was uneducated,she would ask me (to) write her sister letters sometimes.One day,I asked her (whether或if) she’d like to learn to read and write.She gave me (a) very big smile (and) said she’d like that very much.So we’d sit at the kitchen table after I （had) finished my own schoolwork and I’d (teach) her letters and words.She (started) calling me Teacher Soraya.The (first) time Ziba wrote her own letter,I knew I wanted to be a teacher.
1.hire为及物动词,后面直接加宾语,不用of
2.由后文知Ziba是女的,故He 改为 She
3.ask sb to do
4.问她是否想学读和写,不是想读什么,写什么
5.“给了我一个大大的微笑”
6.表示并列,并无转折
7.这个比较可疑,不过finished是发生在sit之前的,用过去完成时为好.我在想楼主说10个错误是什么意思.如果说是要改10处,应该改这个；如果说改九处,有一处打钩,这个就不用改了.
8.这里的I'd与前面一句的We'd一样,都是I would的缩写,表示过去常常……故后面应接动词原形
9.“开始”这一动作发生在过去,用过去时
10.应该要说的是“Ziba第一次写信时”吧,不是最后一次.The first time可以引导时间状语从句的,故不用再加when
楼上的,help around the house可以的,不信你google搜搜看

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tkpg 网友

该名网友总共回答了5个问题，此问答他的回答如下：

第一行去掉of,He改成she，第二行write前加to,第三行what改为whether，very前的the改为a，第四行but改为and,第五行starts改为started

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Acab_tt 网友

该名网友总共回答了11个问题，此问答他的回答如下：

When I was in Grade4,my father hired of（of去掉） Ziba
to help around（around'改成with) the house.He had a sister .
Since Ziba was uneducated,she would ask me（加to） write her sister letters sometimes...

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