短文改错Dear Mary,I’m writing to ask some advice.You know,I have

短文改错
Dear Mary,
I’m writing to ask some advice.You know,I have the habit of keep a diary.I’ve already had four diaries.I’m currently on my five one,but I don’t know what to write about any more.It seems what all I’ve written about is my day,such as go to a film last Wednesday; playing basketball with all my friend yesterday.Sometimes I like to read it,because it make me feel fulfilled.But now I want write down my thoughts and feelings,which I think it is hard.Could you give us some advice?
Yours,
Lily hzt888 1年前他留下的回答 已收到2个回答

红尘无你 网友

该名网友总共回答了18个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：100%

ask for
keeping a diary
fifth one
about 去掉
what 去掉
going to a film
makes me
want to write down
us改成 me
yours Lily

1年前他留下的回答 追问

6

hzt888

but I don’t know what to write about any more 为什么不是将how换成what？ which I think it is hard 为什么不去掉it such as go to a film last Wednesday 为什么go要改成going yours lily？！这也算……

红尘无你

1. how：对行为方式表示提问，是疑问副词。 how to do：怎么去做，do后要有宾语。 what：对行为内容表示提问，是疑问代词。 what to do：做什么，what即是do的宾语 例： I don't know how to do it. 我不知道怎么做这件事。 I don't know what to do. 我不知道该做什么。 如果要用how的话 则是how to write about it yours lily 这是写信的格式 such as 后面接名词 going to a film 才能是个名词性短语 才能作为一个整体存在 看了之后 感觉那个it 确实要去掉 which在这个地方指代前面“but now .....feelings" 这个句子 i think 作插入语 it 去掉 那就通顺了

sspsml 网友

该名网友总共回答了2个问题，此问答他的回答如下：

楼上正解

1年前他留下的回答

1

　　以上就是小编为大家介绍的短文改错Dear Mary,I’m writing to ask some advice.You know,I have 的全部内容，如果大家还对相关的内容感兴趣，请持续关注上海建站网！