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luffy is a 17-year-old boy.he has dream to be a sea robber since he was very young.
he wants take a risk to find the treasure.he has find 8 friends to travel together.including a cook,a doctor,a musician ,a historian and others.they all have their own dream.they help each other and Spread joy to everyone.
my favourite Character is Roronoa·Zoro.he is a manful swordman and uses 3 knives.
zoro comes from east blue .his hair looks like green seaweed.He is fearless and Never afraid of any difficulties.he dream to be the best swordman ,let his name be hear in the heaven. gbxcnh 1年前他留下的回答 已收到2个回答

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该名网友总共回答了26个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：96.2%

He has dreamed to be a pirate since he was a little kid
He wants to take a risk on finding the priceless treasure,which is called "One Piece".
For now,he has found 8 friends,including a cook,a doctor,a musician,a historian and some others,to travel together.
They all have their own dreams.
3 swords
He dreams to be the best swordsman of the world,letting his name to be heard in the heaven.

1年前他留下的回答

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该名网友总共回答了8个问题，此问答他的回答如下：

luffy is a 17-year-old boy.he has a dream to be a pirate since he was a little boy.
he wants to take a risk to find the treasure-- One piece.he has found 8 friends to travel together,including a c...

1年前他留下的回答

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