我写的作文请大家提一点意见The picture vividly portrays a thought—provking

我写的作文请大家提一点意见
the picture vividly portrays a thought—provking sence in which there are so many cars on the crowded road that they can not move any more,then drivers fall asleep when trapped in the situation.obviously,it goes without saying that the picture aims at revealing a common and seriously and common phenomenon:traffic jams are prevailing nowadays.
the following reasons may be contribute to the phenomenon.firstly,some businessmen short of occupational principles,in order to save cost and make profit,overtaking is still frequently detected,regardless of life healthy.secondly,with development of economic and technologic ,more and more people have all forms of automobiles,which result in frequently traffic jams.therefore ,traffic jams are like epidemic disease that spreads fast and will destroy the whole traffic system if not cured in time.
considering the above analysis ,we should adopt efficient and positive measures to prevent the situation from deterorating .for one thing ,the *** need to implement sufficiently relevant laws and regulations in order to strengthen inspections.for instance ,to reduce price and improve relevant facilities .for another,an awarness of leading a frugal and health life should be infused to everybody’s mind .only in this way,can we improve situation of the overcrowed traffic. 肥罗滚皮球 1年前他留下的回答 已收到2个回答

飘飘散香 网友

该名网友总共回答了21个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：100%

may be contribute 错了
firstly,some 这句错得一塌糊涂
of economic and technologic 错
need --> needs
an awarness 错 这句很怪啊

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88hao33 网友

该名网友总共回答了1个问题，此问答他的回答如下：

may be contribute
firstly, some
of economic and technologic
错了
我觉得还是很好

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2

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