请英语好的帮忙找一下错误并修改一下，着急用谢谢了

请英语好的帮忙找一下错误并修改一下，着急用谢谢了
First of all, you should take the initiative to say hello to each other.
As the saying goes: "a resuscitation, two cooked." For a stranger, you should say hello to each other, you put it at a higher position. By courtesy of the enthusiastic attitude towards each other, must be able to open the door of communication. If you can honestly look confident to face each other's eyes, will give each other a profound impression.
You also need to pay attention to their own expression.
The depths of the human mind the idea will form at outside, in expressions.People arrive in meeting places, often only pay attention to "tie is not just", "hairis messy" dressed aspects, but ignore the importance of "expression". If youwant to meet for the first time a good impression, may wish to look in the mirror,carefully check their facial expression is with not the same as usual, if too tight,the best first at herself in the mirror.
Finally, I want to remind you, guide each other to talk about his things will pull into the distance between you.
Any person who has consciously triumphs, but then again, proud, proud thing, if no other questions, oneself also can't mentioned. And then, if you can be just perfect timely and it will come as a topic, the other must be overjoyed, and open your heart to speak one's mind freely. Due to the chance to others, your relationship will be more harmonious.
Don't ignore parted ways. Generally speaking, the most effective is the first andlast position. Therefore, in the process of work left a bad impression or somesmall problems, if can in the end will be a good impression deeply rooted in their hearts, can restore the original loss caused by.
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you 跟each other 矛盾了，至少要用we才行，这样通篇就已经有不止一个地方要改。

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