帮我改正下英语一级作文!情景：昨天是小红16岁的生日,她开了个晚会,邀请我们大家参加.请用英语写一篇50字的作文,描述小

帮我改正下英语一级作文!
情景：昨天是小红16岁的生日,她开了个晚会,邀请我们大家参加.请用英语写一篇50字的作文,描述小红的生日晚会.内容具体如下：
1.小红在昨晚8点开了个16岁的生日晚会.
2.她的同学和朋友都参加了生日晚会
3.她父母为大家准备了丰盛的饭菜,我们给她送了礼物
4.她很愉快,我们也很开心.
我写的如下：
xiaohong is sixteen years old ,yesterday was her brithday,he had big party,start in 8'o clock she intived classmate and good friends .she parents is prapare delicious food for us .We have present a gift to her .
She was very happy,we were happy too! 中等qq1900 1年前他留下的回答 已收到2个回答

qianru 网友

该名网友总共回答了23个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：82.6%

xiaohong is sixteen years old ,it was her brithday yestetday ,she hold a big party which started at 8'o clock.she intived her classmates and good friends .her parents provided delicious food for us .We presented a gift to her .
She was very happy,so were we!

1年前他留下的回答

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静水丝冰 网友

该名网友总共回答了14个问题，此问答他的回答如下：

首字母大写，我想你可能是打错了，He had big party,start in 8'o clock. she intived classmate and good friends .改为She hold a big party,it started in 8'o clock.She invited her classmate(最好加s）and good friends. 把she parent...

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