新手英语日记,找朋友修改.7/31

新手英语日记,找朋友修改.7/31
My name is Snow,I write daily first day.I never wrote daily before.I got up at half past six.I went out at half past seven.It arrived office at eight clock.My colleagues is all friendly.My boss is the meeting everyday.I don't like the meetting.I often doze off on the office.
请英语朋友帮忙修改下.谢谢
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SmartMonkey 网友

该名网友总共回答了19个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：89.5%

daily是日报，日记用diary.
第一句不通顺，
I went out at half past seven.前加一个Then会更好。
It was already eight o'clock when I arrived at my office.
My colleages were all friendly.用复数，同时描述过去情况用过去式。
My ...

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zglleijh198456 网友

该名网友总共回答了15个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：93.3%

有错误。第一句应为：This is my first time I have written it.还有I arrived...,My colleagues are...,My boss seems a man who only knows to eat。最重要的是你在写啥？没主题啊

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hz_dove 网友

该名网友总共回答了15个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：86.7%

My name is Snow, it is the first time for me to write a dairy.I got up at half past six and went out at half past seven.I arrived at the office at eight clock. My colleagues are friendly.My boss makes...

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bqod-d 网友

该名网友总共回答了14个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：85.7%

My name is Snow. It's my first day to write a diary. I never write a diary before. I got up at half past six.I went out at half past seven.It arrived office at eight'o clock.My colleagues are all friendly.My boss holds a meeting every day.I don't like meettings.I often doze off in the office.
这样改差不多了。

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