导读：短文改错 一行一错 急用When World War 2 broke out,Disney joined in the 短文改错 一行一错 急用When World War 2 broke out,Disney joined in the Red Cross and went to France,there he stayed until the war over.After...
短文改错 一行一错 急用When World War 2 broke out,Disney joined in the
短文改错 一行一错 急用
When World War 2 broke out,Disney joined in
the Red Cross and went to France,there
he stayed until the war over.After the war,he
returned Kansas to work for a company
where made fairy story cartoons.This was
the kind of work he like best.He determined to
find better ways of making the cartoons moving
so that the cartoon characters will seem alive.
Later he joined his elder brother,Roy,in Hollywood,
California.There they soon put up their own company
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该名网友总共回答了21个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：100%
1.去掉"in"
2."there"改为"where"
3.在"the war"和"over"之间加上"was"
4."return"后面加上"to"
5."where"改为"which"
6.你可能打错了 "like"可能是"liked" ."determined"前面加上"was"
be determined to do sth.
7."moving"改为"move"
8."will"改为"would"
9."join"后面加上"with"
10.Maybe 将"put up"改为"build up"
1年前他留下的回答
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